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​My favorite holiday is Christmas because Jesus was born on that day. That is why it is called Christmas with the suffix Christ. It is not nice to me if you call it X-mas because it is not X-mas it is Christmas! It is a happy uplifting holiday!

What I do on this holiday is very important to me because three wise men gave Jesus three gifts : Gold, Frankincense, and Myrrh.We just give gifts. We give gifts and get gifts. It has passed so there is another holiday to be revealed but,I am talking about this holiday!

The weather is verrrry cold like it is in December through about Februrary. We have to wear earmuffs and jackets ( coats ).I love when it snows because this was my first year it snowed and I played in it! Realy two thousand ten.

My brother turned seven on the eighth of January so this is my conclusion. This my favorite holiday and it should be yours too!

​ Good job with the colon! I also like how you started with the story behind Christmas, it is a good start. This is an excellent essay so far just make sure you add what you do for the holiday(which I see you have started), as well as who you celebrate with, and what the weather is like.