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letter to Murtaza Tre -- these look like the beginnings of a really, really good essay. I think your planning web looks great, and the Microsoft Word document looks similarly high-quality. I think it'd be really cool if you explain why you like spelling, typing, etc.; I think you're already giving the reader a great idea of what you like about Joshua Academy, and I think just explaining the reasons why is your next step.

I like it a lot so far!

Your buddy, Ja

Hey, Tre! I know you're writing a prompt today, and I'm sure you'll do fantastic. Don't hold back -- tell me everything you know! Remember to include the beginning, middle, and end to your work. I can't wait to see what's up! Good luck!

Your friend, James

So Tre, I know the day is over, and I hope everything has gone well for you. I can't wait to read your paper over; judging by how great your letter was, I'm sure you're a fantastic writer. Let's use this page and the Discussion here on the Wikispaces to chat. If you want, we can even add more pictures and videos to this page. Are there any songs, pictures, or videos you'd like me to add? Feel free to yourself, too. Hope to see you soon -- I had a great time meeting you in person! See you later.

Again, your friend, James

"First, we had this camera and put decorations on it, like stickers and paint. Then, we got on the computer, but the first one we got on didn't work. But Ms. Bombick gave us a different computer. And then the computer that we got started to work. Then we got to the internet; then we typed in 'wikispaces.' Then we signed in and made our tags. Then we made a soccer famous picture, and then we put a video of Michael Jackson -- the video is 'Thriller.' That's how we made this paragraph!" -- Tre and James



**__Published Work__**

My Favorite Holiday -- I really like this! It reminds me a lot of what we do over the holidays. I would continue with what you have already; it's very strong. Keep going with the theme of what it means to YOU -- I (and everyone else) like to hear about how Christmas affects you personally.

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